For the very first time i have attempted writing in english..
the two lines of this poem i had in dream last night ..
from those two lines i developed this poem...
please give ur views...and please be very straight forward..
The Camel and The Horse
were on the way.
On a dusty road
they had a play.
They had a chase
the swiftest to declare.
And they ran
Like the stormy air.
But the horse went
far and far
The camel looked like
lost in war.
He looked a high
in the skies.
he had a plea
in his eyes.
Oh teacher teacher,
tell me the course.
which will make me
like a horse.
In the desert,
they met again.
The camel seeked
to vanish the pain.
They had a chase
to clear the doubt.
and now the camel,
the last to shout.
He was the winner.
He realized the gift.
In every track,
no one is swift.
Ravinder Jahangir
12/01/2011
10:00 am